It’s been fun to read the first grade writing samples that Luke brainstorms and then writes during Writing Time at school. The teacher gives a topic and then they spend some time making a idea web and then writing. Spelling corrected so you could read it!
Topic – The Best Christmas: Germany Christmas
My favorite Christmas was my Christmas in Germany. First my mom and dad woke up and then woke up everybody. After mom and dad woke every body up, then dad opened the line. Everyone rant to see their stockings. I got almost everything I wanted. Then we ate breakfast. Mom made Christmas breakfast. I was so yummy! It was yummy like a big pile of ice cream! After we ate breakfast, we started to open presents. My favorite present was Woody of a Potato Head. I loved the Woody Potato head because every time it’s arm fell off. Then I laughed the hardest I could. After we opened presents, we had a good prayer “Heavenly Father, thank you for our dear blessings. Please bless that we will have a great day. Please bless that we will have a great day. Please bless that we will have some great holidays like this holiday. In the name of Jesus Christ, Amen.” My dad said a good prayer. I think Christmas is the best, only if it is at Germany.
Topic – The Best Part of the Playground: The Swings
The best part of the playground is the swings. I think it is the best because I swing high. When I go on the swings I pretend that I am flying like Superman. It is also my favorite part because I like jumping off of the swings. It makes me feel as high as space. In my opinion, the swings are definitely the greatest part of the playground.
Topic – My Favorite Animals: Turtles
I love turtles. Turtles are my favorite animal. There is a bunch of reasons why. First, they are the best because they are so slow. I like that they are slow because it would be fun to go easy on them if we play tag with them. Another reason why I like how they are slow is when they walk on the sand, it makes a big turtle trail. They look cool in their shell, and it is cool with their shell protecting themselves. It is ridiculous when the turtles are in their shell and they float in the water. Another good reason is that they can go on land and water. It is cool because if a scary animal chases a turtle from far away, it will go slow on land. Once they get on the water they start to go faster and faster. I think turtles are the best water animals in the whole wide world.
Topic – What is Winter
Winter is a bunch of pillows on the ground outside.
Winter is sledding on a giant hill.
Winter is the North pole.
Winter is making a snow angel.
Winter is freezing fingers.
Topic – My Hawaii Vacation: Kauai Hawaii
Me and my family went on a trip to Hawaii. One of my favorites was going to the Beach. It was fun because we made a lot of sand castles. Then we got in the water and then ran away from the waves. We played with sand toys too. I like the sand toy that you put sand in it and then it spins and lands on the sand. Another place I liked that was at Hawaii, was the swimming pool. The swimming pool is fun because there is a big hot tub and it was fun to swim in the deep end. At the pool we have water toys that are Hulk, Ironman, and Captain America. We went to restaurants. My favorite one is Bubba Burgers. My favorite food is a Burger. At Bubba Burgers me and my family liked to say ‘Aloha’ to the people. We also went snorkeling too. I like snorkeling because we get to see fish. The first day we went snorkeling I saw one fish but the next time I went I saw a lot of fish. Me and my family will go to Hawaii again because it is the best place ever.
Topic – If I could be any Storybook Character: Ash
If I could be any story book character, I would be Ash Ketchum from the Pokémon TV Series. I really want to be Ash because he’s in Pokémon and Pokémon is my favorite video game in the whole world. He is good at catching Pokémon. If I was Ash I would catch all my favorite Pokémon like Sither, Julteon, Blastoise, Charzard, Muck and a bunch of other Pokémon. Ash is going to be the greatest master of them all. I want to be the greatest master too. I think Ash Ketchum is the best story book character any one can pick.
Topic – My Favorite Movie – Lord of the Rings
My favorite movie, of course, is Lord of the Rings. Lord of the Rings is about Dwarfs and Hobbits trying to kill the eye. First, Lord of the Rings is awesome because there are awesome characters. The characters are awesome because they fight good and they have cool weapons. Another reason why I like Lord of the Rings is that it is sad and awesome at the same time. The sad and awesome part is when Boromir is fighting a bunch of orcs. Then the boss orc shot an arrow in Boromir, but he was still fighting. Then another arrow zoomed through him when he still was fighting. then another arrow went in his stomach. But he was still fighting. Then he fell down and could not fight. Then another arrow was about to go in him. But then Aragorn saved Boromir by not letting Boromir get killed. Then Boromir dies. Aragorn was mad so he killed the boss orc. In my opinion, Lord of the Rings is the most awesomist movie ever!
Topic – My favorite Season – Winter
Winter is the Best. First, it is so fun because we make snow angels in the snow. You can make them big or small. You can do whatever you want to. Another reason why I like winter is that we can make snowmen, and that is why we have winter. You should not be like Elsa and stay in your room. Be like Anna and build a snowman. The last thing why I like winter is that you can go sledding, but do it on a big hill. I like sledding because we go as fast as a flash in the sky, and it is funny when we fall off into the snowy snow. I think winter is the best season this world could ever have.
Topic – How to Blow a Bubble
It is tricky to blow a bubble with bubble gum. First, you need to unwrap the wrapper because you can not blow a bubble with the wrapper. You also need to put the gum in your mouth. Next, you need to chew. Be patient! It will take a while! Once you are done chewing, then there are more steps to do. You should remember to flatten the gum on the roof of your mouth. Then, stick the gum to the top and bottom teeth. Finally, you just blow. Then it makes a bubble! Watch out! It can get really big! Blowing a bubble is hard and exciting to do.
Luke’s teacher added these words at the end of the quarter: Luke, you are an amazing writer! You have excellent juicy details in your paragraphs! I love how you read with great expression! You also remember what you read. Continue to stay focused during writing to improve time management!!